"VHR is a unique massive multi-player browser based game in which you can breed, buy, sell, auction train, and compete your horses with other players from all around the world! This game is very special in which all horses are unique, and created by artifical-genetics and a unique AI system. The game itself is dedicated to being the best on the web, and is created by player ideas as well as the avid horse lover game developers. "
And hey, maybe after that he can help retool
VirtualPups!
Oh yeah. Great things on the horizon. Indubitably.
Btw, Dave, running the text on your main sites through a spelling and grammar checker before posting might not be a bad idea. You might also consider paying someone with a middling knowledge of how to write to come up with some better text for you. "This game is very special in which all horses are unique..." ?! "VP offers protection leases for players to safetly do this!" Safetly?
Seriously man, find some random English major to proof/edit your text for $50, or some pot, or a month's worth of ramen.
edit: Great gnu, man! Was looking around a little more and hit this page:
http://www.virtualhorseranch.com/letter_to_parents.php
A short list for you: persistant, intelegence, nationalaties, atleast, privelage. Then there are the mulltiple uses of "is" where "are" would be correct, the continual misusage of compete throughout the site, some frightening passages I'm trying to block out right now, and the horrific punctuation that puts even my love for the comma to shame.
I'm afraid to go read any more because the proofreader in me is having some sort of an OCD episode now. Really, get someone to go through all of your web text. At the very least run it through Word's spelling & grammar checker and make the recommended changes. For the children.